Hello and welcome to the blog of an aspiring author.
At the moment, I am working on a fantasy novel titled Sacrilege. Rather than giving a summary, I’ve decided to post a portion of the opening passage below.
“Rosalind found herself studying her figure in the mirror. Today, she was going to be a good girl. It meant tying her auburn hair into a stern, professional ponytail; it meant wearing a skirt rather than shorts; it meant concealing her impressive cleavage in a proper blouse under insufferable summer heat; most importantly, it meant no crossbows.”
It’s still in its infancy and needs a lot of work. This is where readers come in. While a review such as “good work” is encouraging, proofreading, criticisms are far more important. You will find the work by searching my pen name, Vagrance, on fictionpress, or simply follow the link below.